To improve your writing, you need to edit yourself mercilessly. These six editing tips are from copywriters, editors, and freelance writers; they’ll help you clean up your articles and chapters, and increase the chances of selling your work to an editor or publisher.
Before the tips, a quip:
“It is perfectly okay to write garbage – as long as you edit brilliantly.” ~ C. J. Cherryh.
Fellow scribes, don’t let your fears of writing or rejection stop you from writing that first draft! Rest in the knowledge that almost any piece of writing — no matter how limp or soggy — can be improved with a few simple editing tips. For more editing advice, read Great Little Last-Minute Editing Tips for Writers: The Ultimate Frugal Booklet for Avoiding Word Trippers and Crafting Gatekeeper-Perfect Copy (pictured). And, check out these six tips from experienced copywriters, editors, and freelance writers…
6 Editing Tips for Writers From Copywriters, Editors, and Freelancers
1. Use the “find” feature to eliminate certain phrases. “When writers have finished their first draft, they should use the “find” feature to identify the phrases “there are” or “there is” or “to be.” There are always better ways to write sentences — without using those phrases. This type of editing makes writing more action packed and creative.” – Meghan Sager, public relations specialist.
2. Eliminate the word ‘that.’ “Rarely is the word ‘that’ valuable or necessary,” says John Honeycutt, author of Provocative Business Change: Business-Turfing. “Take, for example, ‘I hope that your effort is successful’ versus ‘I hope your effort is successful!'” When you’re editing your writing, take out words that add unneccessary bulk.
3. Trust the writing process. “The process works. The job isn’t in the writing, it’s in the rewriting,” says television, book, and magazine writer Jill Golick. “The first draft isn’t supposed to be good; writers just need to barrel their way through to the end without self-editing. The second draft will be better, and the third better still. The more the article or chapter is rewritten, the better it’ll get.” Golick also encourages writers to forget quality, and go for quantity.
4. Let your writing go. “The best writing advice I ever received was to not get attached to words,” says Alyice Edrich, editor and freelance writer. “When writers allow themselves to get emotionally attached to what they’ve written — which is really easy to do as a creative artist — they don’t allow themselves to improve their writing. While it is true that some critiques are a matter of opinion and can be easily ignored, other critiques are a matter of business. Editors, for instance, often come back with suggestions to change paragraphs, delete sentences, increase background information or sources, or overhaul certain grammatical errors. Those critiques can sting and hurt a writers’ egos, even making them feel like failures or as though they’ve been personally attacked. The problem occurs when writers don’t take those critiques objectively and choose an unprofessional attitude, causing the editor to wish she’d never given the writer the assignment in the first place.”
5. Check the facts in your article, book proposal, or essay. “My key piece of writing advice is look up everything,” says freelance writer and editor Cynthia Clampitt. “Writers should NEVER write what they think is correct without checking first. I can’t tell you how many times I’ve seen things come across my desk, in which a writer has written off the top of his or her head. The errors were horrendous. I’ve seen Mikhail Baryshnikov named as the president of Russia, penultimate used to mean “more than the best” (it means “next to last),” and more examples. I tell writers there are two things they need to look up: all their facts and all their words. Because if they don’t, either the publication will look stupid or some harried editor has to rewrite the piece.”
6. When in doubt, take the word (or phrase) out. “According to my journalism professor, writers tend to fall in love with their own words. They need to use an editor’s eye when revising and editing their writing,” says Mary Beth Kriskey, a copywriter and public relations specialist. “Sometimes writers are blind to words or phrases that do not enhance the goal of the written piece. To this day, whether it is my own writing or I am proofing/reviewing a project for work or family and friends, if something strikes me as extraneous, duplicated, awkwardly phrased and so on, I (try to) remove it.”
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